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Letting Go  

Ari_fairy

9/4/2010 11:27 pm
 Bright heart wrapped tight
Demands release.
Alone, unknown,
A life unbound,
A vagrant soul
Without a home.

Terse lance of need,
Forgotten seed,
Depended from
Untended reeds.
Faint hope unquenched,
Unwanted weeds.

What hidden vine
Around it binds?
Restrain, refrain;
Unbidden pain;
Remove the fear,
Unwind the twine.

What could have been
Remains unseen
Beneath the skin
She’s wrapped it in
Pared tautly with
A blade too keen.

Lost heart soars free.
The tortured tree
A sentinel
Of what will be.
Limbs sheltering
Her agony.

As dawn awakes
Revealing lakes
As ribbons curled
About her snake
Silence declares
Her last mistake.
Feel the passion, walk in peace, live in love....Ari
straightmind
232 posts 

9/5/2010 3:41 am

 it took me time to let go of someone i love so much...and still thinking wish he came back to me but i know its impossible....so as i always said..cheer up its not the end of the world...
rest your mind, rest your heart and be with me for awhile.!!!

nanjinita
372 posts 

9/5/2010 2:50 pm

 Lost soul still trying to find its way,not sure back or forth.....

Touching piece..with remarkable ryhming.I like it!

Ari_fairy
20642 posts 

9/5/2010 7:52 pm
    Quoting ndpendentlady44:
    This is a perfect explanation of the place you are in right now, and it's just hauntingly sad.
Not quite sure why, Sis...hopefully just a passing phase.

Love and hugs to you.
Feel the passion, walk in peace, live in love....Ari

Ari_fairy
20642 posts 

9/5/2010 7:52 pm
    Quoting straightmind:
    it took me time to let go of someone i love so much...and still thinking wish he came back to me but i know its impossible....so as i always said..cheer up its not the end of the world...
It isn't quite that way, but I appreciate the advice. Thank you.
Feel the passion, walk in peace, live in love....Ari

Ari_fairy
20642 posts 

9/5/2010 7:54 pm
    Quoting nanjinita:
    Lost soul still trying to find its way,not sure back or forth.....

    Touching piece..with remarkable ryhming.I like it!
Good break-down, Nanjinita. For you only...lost soul in a period where it wants to just give up. Sometimes the journey begins with shards of glass under our feet.

How are you, my friend?
Feel the passion, walk in peace, live in love....Ari

nemesis58
3364 posts 

9/6/2010 4:42 pm

 I was trying to choose the paragraph that appealed the most to me - it is impossible; each one is so profound and stimulating yet the whole is awesome inching towards the nadir till the last two paragraphs soar.

That is where the beauty lies - a spirit may be held down awhile but finally 'silence declares its mistake' and 'lost souls soar free.'

Many thanks for sharing this beauty, Arre dear.
LIFE MAY NOT BE A BED OF ROSES, BUT NO ONE STOPPED US FROM PUTTING ROSES IN OUR BED.

Ari_fairy
20642 posts 

9/6/2010 6:19 pm
    Quoting nemesis58:
    I was trying to choose the paragraph that appealed the most to me - it is impossible; each one is so profound and stimulating yet the whole is awesome inching towards the nadir till the last two paragraphs soar.

    That is where the beauty lies - a spirit may be held down awhile but finally 'silence declares its mistake' and 'lost souls soar free.'

    Many thanks for sharing this beauty, Arre dear.
Thank you. It is a beautiful interpretation of the piece. I'm glad you shared it.

Arre
Feel the passion, walk in peace, live in love....Ari

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